Yes, I would nuke a baby
In fact, I just did.
If this were real life, you would have wasted a fine nuclear bomb. And thats no good.
I had to memorize all the equations of fermentation from glucose into ethanol and CO2 for chemistry class, but i recon your video sums up the process better than my teachers ever did.
the only problem with the film is the yeast are a bit too disturbing. Accurate, but disturbing. Good job.
If that was really one of your first,
The animation and sound quality are both pretty good, and definately better than the majority of peoples when they start out.
Being critical, there was a bit too much repetition in just empty walking frames, which dragged it out a bit. Instead of editing it down though, itd also work to make it a bit less boring by adding background music~ in this case, soft jazz would probably suit the bar scene and add a bit more interest and ambience.
the only other main problem was the lack of a repeat button, but well done if this really was one of your first works with flash
this must have taken forever to do frame by frame...
it's folds are almost perfect
my only issue is with the background music which reminds me of the music that goes to a extremely creepy scene in a horror movie which i just cant put my finger on
hitchcock's psycho? yeah, it's pretty freaky tune. I think it suits the obsessive compulsive nature of origami in general.
Oh, and it took FOREVER... but I've been chipping away at it gradually over the past month or so.
Room for improvement
the story and animation wasn't BAD, but it wasnt necissarilly good either.
graphics were often pixely, and some of the voices had a fuzzy mic noise going in the background.
I also noticed a lack of a replay button at the end.
Having fixed all that, i probably woulda given you maybe 7 stars, but the main issue for me is I just didn't find the storyline that funny.
it may seem harsh, but its my opinion
Thanks for watching. As far as the video quality goes, that was just a problem when the video file was converted. :( We use a much better Mic now, this video is a year old. Your opinion doesn't seem harsh at all, there's obviously room for improvement. There's been a slow progression, but things have been improving overall.
Oh, and we're working on video controls. We just started posting things to Newgrounds, we don't have those things quite done yet. Full video controls are available on our site though.
you spelt 'dropped' wrong
were you high when you submitted this?
I chuckled though so you can have a 2
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